Since the name of your story is Inhabitat Island, I guess this story will evolve around this island only. It’s a drawback but I think there is potential in this story…. Please don’t let this series die off in just one part. Here are my suggestions for the story to move forward.
1. Hans & Tim’s mother have twins [a boy and a girl, later on, these will be pivotal for the story]
2. Eventually they will be rescued and start a new life as a couple in the same city where Tim and his father live.
3. Tim can’t overcome the fact that Hans, his bully successfully fucked her mother, got her pregnant, and started a new life. so he decided for a revenge.
4. Tim is weak and fragile. but as soon as he decides that he has to confront Hans one day, he begins to work out.
5. Tim’s mother actually loves her son Tim. so she explains how desperate the island situation was and how she had to react and do whatever she did. She also elaborates that she was taken care of by a manly person like Hans, and her sex life has dramatically improved now.
6. Listening to his mom Tim will develop a sexual desire for this mom. [ and opps! another mom-son romp]
7. The possibility is endless from here. mom-son sex, mom-son-Hans sex, the twins after 14 years also can join in.
SexRex
Since the name of your story is Inhabitat Island, I guess this story will evolve around this island only. It’s a drawback but I think there is potential in this story…. Please don’t let this series die off in just one part. Here are my suggestions for the story to move forward.
1. Hans & Tim’s mother have twins [a boy and a girl, later on, these will be pivotal for the story]
2. Eventually they will be rescued and start a new life as a couple in the same city where Tim and his father live.
3. Tim can’t overcome the fact that Hans, his bully successfully fucked her mother, got her pregnant, and started a new life. so he decided for a revenge.
4. Tim is weak and fragile. but as soon as he decides that he has to confront Hans one day, he begins to work out.
5. Tim’s mother actually loves her son Tim. so she explains how desperate the island situation was and how she had to react and do whatever she did. She also elaborates that she was taken care of by a manly person like Hans, and her sex life has dramatically improved now.
6. Listening to his mom Tim will develop a sexual desire for this mom. [ and opps! another mom-son romp]
7. The possibility is endless from here. mom-son sex, mom-son-Hans sex, the twins after 14 years also can join in.
nudistfamilyboy
Can’t wait for the next part. Love it!
Scott
Weird faces on these people. Comic has nothing to build on. Chapter 1 and done. 2 out of 5
Kraeno
Cant wait for the next
Skriverswe
Really hope this isn’t a one off chapter.